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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I liked your story a lot, although, it was somewhat of a drawl, maybe you could flesh it out a little. There were a few spelling mistakes, but hey, it was your first fic and i don't think it really matters, i understood everything very well and it was clearly put across.
By the way, I especially loved the explaination of how male pregnancy came into existance at the very beginning of your story.
Overall I think you did exceptionally well
Sincerely
DareDevilDemonoid
I liked your story a lot, although, it was somewhat of a drawl, maybe you could flesh it out a little. There were a few spelling mistakes, but hey, it was your first fic and i don't think it really matters, i understood everything very well and it was clearly put across.
By the way, I especially loved the explaination of how male pregnancy came into existance at the very beginning of your story.
Overall I think you did exceptionally well
Sincerely
DareDevilDemonoid
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the premise of the story and your writing style. Do you plan on updating this?
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Cant wait for the next part ^^