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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a pretty good story with a decent plot, but you've got quite a few spelling errors that you could fix. In most cases it's just a case of mistaken words, 'high' instead of 'hi' and that sort of thing. Those kind of things are very distracting. Other than that, I enjoyed your story very much.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your strory. There really isn't that much good CSI:NY slash, but yours was fantastic. I hope that you will keep on writing.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute! I love the way that you portrayed the characters! ^_^
Good Job! Yay for Flack/Danny and the implied Mac/Stella was a nice touch.
Cheers,
Rei Magami
Good Job! Yay for Flack/Danny and the implied Mac/Stella was a nice touch.
Cheers,
Rei Magami