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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was...perfect. You've captured the essence of Sawyer in your writing, and I was transfixed. You ended it so well, too, which makes it even better. I don't know what else to say, really, other than great job!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GUH. Oh my GOD. Your Sawyer is perfect. And that was hot.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed that. Sawyer was spot on!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a shame... no reviews yet to this beautifully written piece.
Outside of some corny phrases (and hey, Sawyer can sometimes sling them just as good), I'd say this was BRILLIANT writing. Very in the moment which makes it hot. I loved the ending... about not being able to be an 8 year old in the moment with her against the tree with the just-fucked glow. So poignant and very Sawyer. Excellent one-shot.
Outside of some corny phrases (and hey, Sawyer can sometimes sling them just as good), I'd say this was BRILLIANT writing. Very in the moment which makes it hot. I loved the ending... about not being able to be an 8 year old in the moment with her against the tree with the just-fucked glow. So poignant and very Sawyer. Excellent one-shot.