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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so want a continuation of this story!!!!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just read the first chapter. intense...but you did a really good job. i could picture it, this could be an episode~! the characters are written well
good job
good job
schedule
July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beatiful
i think i would have cried if you had made sara the victm of sexual abuse...almost cried/threw up when the father was talking.
great story
i think i would have cried if you had made sara the victm of sexual abuse...almost cried/threw up when the father was talking.
great story
schedule
February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
help continue this story so cruel of you to finish at the best bit
lots of luck
Annie
lots of luck
Annie
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lynn! Great story! Love it! You MUST... and when I say must, i mean it... MUST update soon! Wonderful story *wubs*
-Kilala
-Kilala
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a nice way of telling a not so nice story . . . And I'm glad to see that Sara has the strength to face up to the interrogation the way she did. It's a powerful piece of angst.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lynn! *sends praise*. Aw! They kissed! They diiiid it! *cheers and comes down to earth and raises an eyebrow*. Right. I love the way you put cuteness and anger and beauty in one chapter, without making it obvious or cheesy. I don't like cheesyness, I loved this. Keep it going... you've been writing well lately.
Andz
Andz
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMMIT IT WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD STUFF!!!!
please please update soon
please please update soon
schedule
December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue.. i like your writing style. you are doing well with the characters. i want more, dammit
schedule
November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found the second chapter on Geekfiction but couldn't find the first chapter so I'm so glad you have posted your story on this site. I'm loving it so far. I felt the utter disgust at the little girls rape and death. Grissoms response to Sara's discussion on weddings was very amusing and just the way he would behave.Please update soon.