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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unless it is written in the olden style-then it is perfectly acceptable to say "the lips of Virginia." This is yestreyear-not modern prose. And I don't think it's drabble-I rated it average-pretty good compared to others!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
drabble is drabble, and almost never worth reading, sorry. They are little writing exercises, only interesting in the process. Back in the old days, they stayed in your journal- now they get posted on the internet, more's the pity!
If you really want to post 100 word ficlets, treat them like poetry and make every word count- make them count twice, in fact. Pay attention to your craft.
"the lips of Virgina", for instance, is editable to "Virginia's lips"
If you really want to post 100 word ficlets, treat them like poetry and make every word count- make them count twice, in fact. Pay attention to your craft.
"the lips of Virgina", for instance, is editable to "Virginia's lips"