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by Darkly

schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it.
person Leta
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, damn, talk about first meeting
person Primero
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The great thing with this fic is that Jess is so in character to how he was when he first arrived to SH.

I can totally see him spotting the most innocent looking girl and want to seduce her just for the fun of it. I love this, because it's real and he IS a 17 year old boy with a dirty and naughty mind. Not some romantic 25 five year old noble man people are trying to make Jess out to be when they write lit!sex. Their smut is all gentle and "Are you sure?" and "I can stop"...

No you can't! You're right in the middle of something. Way to kill the mood!

I really think stories like that take away the fire and passion that is, Lit. So I'm sorry that you don't get more reviews and you don't feel motivated because of that. But I hope that this one can make you want to write one more Lit!smut-piece, at least.

Just for me? *flutter eye-lashes prettily*
person Ann
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. I’ve always loved the thought of Jess seducing Rory, they just had excellent sexually chemistry imo. I hope you’re going to write more Jess/Rory because what the world needs is more Literati!Sex ;) and I adore you’re writing style. I can see the scene you describe in my head like a movie and there are not many fics that can do this for me.
I bow to you and hope for more. :)
person Raven
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much MandiiGirl! It is always nice to hear that your writing is appreciated... *smiling* I'm a little disappointed by the lack of response to the stories though... I guess this site is not very review friendly.... *small smile* Kinda turns you away from wanting to post more... *shrugs* Thank you again though, if you liked it, then it was worth putting this here. *smiling*
person MandiiGirl
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was... H-O-T. About all I can say for it, lol, it was awesome, it was the first I've read like it, and it was way, way Hot.

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