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O.o

FUCKING GROSS

YOU SUCK LOLLERSKATES! THIS FIC WAS BETTER THAN YOUR FUCKING FACE SO GO FLAME ELSEWHERE!

Now how did I know there was going to be a reference to Don Henley in here? ;)

Excellent story.

Lovely, lovely fic. Very heartwarming and sweet, yet with a realistic first time scene.

I think what I liked about this fic the most is that you didn't fall into the trap that other people do; people write M rated PR and suddenly everyone there is a pro in bed, and even the most innocent of characters are into S&M, or all of a sudden its okay for Tommy, Kim and Kat to have a threesome. You captured both characters extremely well, making it more of a romantic moment rather than Tommy just having his way with Kim. Nice job.