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ch 3 - Interesting idea. It seemed to me that the chapters were a little short for the idea content if not the word content. The handling of Sam's blending, her new / renewed relationship / promotion etc was a little abrupt. I know some readers complain if authors take 'to much time' to get to the meat of a story, however, in this case please slow down and take time to explore all the possibilities, which for this story concept would seem to be infinte.

Good start look forward to more.