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by jka1

person Avernion
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's a rather evil epilogue don't you think ;P
person Eloise
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're going to leave it on a cliff hanger? Please - a sequel! Yes, you must write a sequel! I just love C/W.
person kamadi
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,

First of all thank you for sending me the mail with the fact that you completed the story. And now for my reaction of the story: You first attempt at the slash scene was a succes! I liked it....the het scene was also very well done. I must admit that the ending of the story was somewhat of a surprise: with Chris accepting the fact that Wyatt forced him the first time (I mean if somebody put a spell on me I would be pissed....it's actually rape isn't it?....taking away the ability to say no.)and allowing the relationship to continue. But in general I liked your writing skills.

Succes with any other stories that you are writing.

Kamadi
person irisiee
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i Loveee it please update soon
person kamadi
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,

Is this story on hiatus?? Because that would be a shame...it's really good.
person garraffen
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay sex! woooooooooooooooot keep it coming, its rare to find good wyatt/chris fanfics around! ^_^
person yamimana
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story idea. I really like the Wyatt being obsessed with Chris thing but the story would be even better if you got a beta.
I couldn't help but notice that your spelling and punctuation are sometimes a little bit off.
Hopefully you're not too angry with me for pointing it out but I thought you'd like a bit of constructive criticism. I always do.
Please continue soon.
person MICHEALROSENBAUMSAHOTTIE
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS THE FIRST STORY I READ THAT'S FROM A FANDOM OTHER THEN SMALLVILLE IN A LONG WHILE N I GOTTA SAY
THAT WaASSSSSSSSSSS so hot love the whole chris obssesion thing.
looking foward 2 more
person maria
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good! whana reade more about it.. so please hurry up.. =)
person Tsuonae
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! i remember going through the charmed section a (long) time ago...and there was NO slash. None. Nada. Invisdabull. Yours was the first story I read for this pairing (one that i've been Craving for a while). Would it be quite alright if i worship the ground you walk on?

But Question! is you're use of the word "I'll" as "Il" on purpose, like a trademark thing, a word error or is it just grammar thing? Just kina irked me-- Kneejerk reaction, I twitched. It was funny.

I'd like to actually see you on a better site thouhg. AFF.net's formatting sucks ass. Anywhere else you're posted? Hope you continue on.
=_+ Tsui!

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