rate_review Reviews

Absolutely fantastic! I really enjoyed reading it. I had a few issues with how old Janet seemed to be. As I watched the series I didn't see her as as old as Jack, which is how I felt as I read your story. It is totally possible I misread though.
I also felt like you make Daniel into a simpering idiot. If that was your purpose--good job! If not, it's how it came out with me.
Anyway, loved it! Love reading a good finished fic!
Elendilsheart

Zhan

I cannot understand why you have so few reviews quite simply this was a wonderfully and compassoinatly told story of rape and it's affects on all involved this is an epic tale well told amd well written I will kep up to date

Thank you for sharing 5 stars
LOL ladyaph

Wow,excellent writing even with the misspellings. You get a 10 in my book. The detail you put in their interactions, their emotions and everything else could make one feel like they were in the story. Hope you add a closing chapter to this, it's very good.

“Who’s Sahara and what does she have to do with my attack?”

Great Cliff Hanger, I want to know what the hell is Jack going to say to Sam about that. Interesting story, please update soon.

-Linkinparkgundam

OOOH OOOHHHHH OOOHHHHHH!!!! KEEP GOING OR I MIGHT DIE!!
This is excellent and i cant wait for more, The suspence is gonna kill me if you don't update soon, Please continue
Excellent story, excellent character details and just wonderfull in total...don't keep me waiting!