rate_review Reviews

Excellant story. Loved the way it was written and how it ended, very playful. I very much enjoyed reading this. It gives some real insight as to what really happedned between Grissom and Sara when they met in San Fransico. I've seen every episode of this show and that's one of the stories about their past together that i've always wondered about. A job very well done!!

Very well written. Towards the end it made me cry. Sign of a promising author. I especially liked the actual parts from different eppisodes of CSI and incorporated them into the story. Gives a great explanation of how they actually met and just the short time it took to really fall in love. I was very pleased to see well written material without the usual trashy words trying to enhance what was just written. Too bad you couldn't have written (into the future) whether or now Grissom and Sara ever married. But just great the way you did write it.

This is really sweet story filled with so much tenderness and respect for the characters of Gil and Sara. My feelings have always led me to believe that their meeting in San Francisco turned into much more than Teacher & Student. This is a wonderful example of how they met and fell passionately in love, as well as dealing with those emotions when they begin a 'working relationship'. Letting them finally be together, as fate ordained it, was the icing on the cake! Please write more and I wish to give my thanks to your friend Dee, if this story is the result of her cheering you on than, you just keep on cheering Poppie on Dee!!

awesome can't wait for the next chapter