rate_review Reviews

...I don't even know what to say...but this is was WAYYYY too hot!!!!!!!
AMAZING!

I really appreciated that because it had a sense of realism. A touch of 'could happen' and some really nice stuff going on in the charater's heads. If I might make a couple of suggestions? Donny has an authoritative tone when he ascertains control then backs off right away....so, is he nice or a hard-ass? And the oral didn't last long enough for my tastes. I definately think there is material for a chapter two....