rate_review Reviews

Wowzers! I just finished Chapter One, and I had to comment before continuing. I sneaked a peek ahead, and was so happy to see this story's COMPLETE, yea! I wanted to let you know how very much I'm enjoying this story. You know the characters so well, your original characters have good development, and one of the best things: You can SPELL and use GRAMMAR! I'm definitely marking you as a favorite author, if that's possible on this site. I'm very much looking forward to continuing this great story. It's sad that SG1 fanfic readers don't leave reviews as often as they should. My own Jack/Sam story has well over 2,000 hits and not a single review. Go figure. I'm also rating this a resounding FIVE. And now... back to the story. (Oh, I should mention too... dayum, this story's HOT! I'd say more, but I don't want to spoil anything.)

Hey, I've been reading all morning, and it's been fabulous, but I've got one request... can you fix Chapter Five? It's got all these weird characters in there, and it's rather distracting. I'd sure love to finish reading about Sam's visit to Sturgis! Great character, throwing Sex in there... love how it's going so far!