rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story. You have a lot of talent. As an aspiring writter, the only thing I could possiably recomend is that more detail be put into the characters. This would inhance the story's value as a whole. I won't tell you to put Zack and Cody in this story. This is because you've much thought in Maddie. If you did put the twins in the story I would make their role not as conclusive. I look foword to a next chapter or maybe some of your other works.

With much respect,



The Prince of Madness

that was a good first chapter please make sure zack and cody are in it

great story. really incredible. hope you either continue writing this into a series or at least continue writing stories for this show. you have a lot of talent. keep it up.