rate_review Reviews

I very much enjoyed the scene you set up in this story. Chloe and Clark/Kal always had great chemistry and are my favorite pairing in Smallville. The Red K taking away Clark's TOO gentle persona and the way Chloe responds to the aggressive/dominant approach. Only way to make the story better is to continue it, and maybe throw in Chloe's coy/sly quirkishness combined with the inner slut we all wish her to be, to offset the dark dominance of Clark/Kal. I VERY MUCH HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY AS WELL AS YOU WROTE THE INTRO SCENE. Looking forward to reading more.

Feel free to respond to any critiques/suggestions I mentioned. Also I'd b happy to do the same if you have any story ideas you'd like to bouce off someone (me) 《Hope that made sense》