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for Second soul mate

by Avian03

person prophet144
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, but I do have one thing.

When it's just Rocky and Tommy, use Tommy instead of Dr.O. Because they've been friends for so long, Rocky's not going to call him Dr. O. It'd be weird and out of character.
person Leo Lover
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Can't stop crying) Good story. Sniff.

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