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June 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, so disgusting but still excellent! I demand more of this!
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Too heavy stuff for me^^°
But I like the chracterization of T-Bag <3
I use to hate unfinished stories, but in this case I guess I'm rather glad it probably will remain uncompleted...
But I like the chracterization of T-Bag <3
I use to hate unfinished stories, but in this case I guess I'm rather glad it probably will remain uncompleted...
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! it's amazing- T-bag is so scary (yeah, I'm trembling now), Maytag behaves just like I thought he should, and poor Michael... You really have all characters well written!
I absolutely loved it- do you think you will continue one day? *puppy dog eyes*
I absolutely loved it- do you think you will continue one day? *puppy dog eyes*
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, it isn't *that* sick
I've read stories far more *extreme*
But I like it, nonetheless
Are you posting some more?
Gab
I've read stories far more *extreme*
But I like it, nonetheless
Are you posting some more?
Gab
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was the most intense non-con story I have ever read! I write nothing but non-con, dark, angsty stuff myself, but this story floored me. The intnesity, Maytag's characterization, and T-Bag "saving" Michael's pretty face were all excellent. I wonder if T-Bag will get in on the action now that he has Michael cornered, and what will he do to punish his girlfriend who dared to fuck Michael before he had a chance to?
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I really do.
It's sick, twisted, angsty, painful, sad and oh so good.
English isn't my mother language either but I couldn't tell it wasn't yours in the story.
You're a good writer.
I hope you continue, cause Michael does look so pretty when he's scared.
It's sick, twisted, angsty, painful, sad and oh so good.
English isn't my mother language either but I couldn't tell it wasn't yours in the story.
You're a good writer.
I hope you continue, cause Michael does look so pretty when he's scared.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good!!plzz update soon!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job! Hope you continue, I'd love to read more.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You did a really great job with this! I don't think MayTag or Michael were OOC at all - infact I think you characterized Maytag perfectly, like he had snapped or something. I really hope you continue this soon!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really great so far. pLease, please go on.
I just love Michael!!!
I just love Michael!!!