rate_review Reviews

This is beautiful. Kept my interest throughout the whole story. I read the last page, the last part of the page, more than once.
It is a wonderful piece of writing, that end.
Good luck

i know this is the 2nd time i reviewed, but i just saw doomsday and it just broke me apart. and then reading this..i reel like im going to burst into tears, phew... angst takes a lot of of ya huh :P

This whole series is one of the best that i have ever read. Of any fanfiction series ( and i have been reading tons for about 6 years). The characters are very in character and you use the actual story to push things alone. The interludes are just marvolous and they create a real realism for the characters. in all of my mumbo jumbo this is a great series and i signed up with an aff acount just to make sure i could review it ^^

Not sure whether or not I put in a review already but this is too good not to make sure I did.

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!

Rarely have I seen an interweaving around the existing story line done nearly so well. Now that I think about it I can't think of another story that I was so taken with that did this.

Definately a keeper!!! I have extracted it off to my personal archives because there is no way I am going to risk loosings this bit of fiction.

Great Job!

XLF

I did wonder how you were going to handle Boomtown. And you handled it nicely. good going.

Oh Wicked you posted on here to, i have been reading it on Fanfiction.net but now that its on here to i will stick to here, after all Adultfanfiction.net has far more possibilities. I still love this story, and how great are you for updating all the time, if only i could manage that with my stories. Truly wicked, Sadsally

I like where this is going. Please update soon.

I'm loving this so far. The interaction is sweet and it is well written. I can't wait to see more :)