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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
could you continue?
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi
yous story is great good!!!
I´ve never expected that Daniel could be such a asshole!
how could he does this!!! and the other 2 too!!!
I hope he feel the shame and guilty!!!
can you please contact me when you have a new chapter???
that would be nice
greetings Lucifers Angel
yous story is great good!!!
I´ve never expected that Daniel could be such a asshole!
how could he does this!!! and the other 2 too!!!
I hope he feel the shame and guilty!!!
can you please contact me when you have a new chapter???
that would be nice
greetings Lucifers Angel
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries softly* Poor Jack!!!!
*smacks Daniel* SHAME!!! How could he do that to him?! I thought Teal'c had more respect for Jack than that. And Cameron... The ass... He should be shot.
Hope you write a sequel to show what goes through the minds of those three afterwards.
Best of luck!
*smacks Daniel* SHAME!!! How could he do that to him?! I thought Teal'c had more respect for Jack than that. And Cameron... The ass... He should be shot.
Hope you write a sequel to show what goes through the minds of those three afterwards.
Best of luck!
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this was a very sad story for Jack, hm? I loved how you were able to capture him just right. Nice job. ^_^ But, damnit, what was Daniel thinking??
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. Good flow and I really like the way you captured O'Neill's attitude. The whole walking away and not confronting Daniel. Good characterization.