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for Beautiful Death

by Hnoss

schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is starting to take an interesting shape. The Irish Folk myth looks frightening. It's good to know that Ronin didn't inherit the evil. Except that blood drinking thing.

I would like to suggest a more thorough beta, though. The grammar and spelling issues are distracting.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Jade29
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! You ended the chapter there! What happens next? Scratch that, don't tell me, just update. please? It's such a great story.
person L2007P
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I can't wait to read more.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is grate
more soon
thanks
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've wanted to do that with a door to somepeople too. XD

Great job! Keep going!
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this, you should really continue it, ^-^

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