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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is very imaginative and beautiful. It has an easy, yet quickening pace with plenty of interesting lines of dailogs and events while maintaining the magic of the original series.
I love this because it's as though this could be an episode, haha, though it would be slighly pornographic. Not to mention, I have a bit of a thing for Locke, this is like a fantasy. Good job! I enjoyed your descriptions and what the characters were feeling too.
Can't believe I'm the first to review this. It's written too well not to be noticed. ;)
Keep up the good work!
I love this because it's as though this could be an episode, haha, though it would be slighly pornographic. Not to mention, I have a bit of a thing for Locke, this is like a fantasy. Good job! I enjoyed your descriptions and what the characters were feeling too.
Can't believe I'm the first to review this. It's written too well not to be noticed. ;)
Keep up the good work!