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March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
pleases write more
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story and I absolutely love it! I hope that you decide to start writing it again soon. I can't wait to find out what happens.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just ran into your story `Broken Soul' a few days ago and I think it's quite good. So far. Are you planning on updating it any time soon?, because I really want to read more of it..soonest!
On the side, so far, it's brought up a fair few questions (plus a *bunch* of others that are busily bubbling away in the back of my head; they'll probably come out of hiding and give me a poke later on) that I hope you'll be dealing with in future chapters. Such as: was Tommy already..experienced when he was raped? If so, it *might* mitigate some of the nastiest of the aftereffects, but if he was a virgin... How will this affect the Ranger team and their ability to fight? Will Tommy still be able to morph? An event like this could cause severe imbalances that MAY make transforming difficult at best or flat-out impossible [for now] at worst. What about Jason and the rest of the gang, plus Kat? What sort of long-term effects will be cropping up? And Jeff and his gang of brain-dead morons; what'll happen to them? MY preference would be expulsion-with-extreme-prejudice from school, off of the football team and arrested. Plus how will this affect the school and community as a whole?
There's a lot of potential here for some major fun! I'll be interested in seeing what your mind/muses come up with in/for future chapters.
On the side, so far, it's brought up a fair few questions (plus a *bunch* of others that are busily bubbling away in the back of my head; they'll probably come out of hiding and give me a poke later on) that I hope you'll be dealing with in future chapters. Such as: was Tommy already..experienced when he was raped? If so, it *might* mitigate some of the nastiest of the aftereffects, but if he was a virgin... How will this affect the Ranger team and their ability to fight? Will Tommy still be able to morph? An event like this could cause severe imbalances that MAY make transforming difficult at best or flat-out impossible [for now] at worst. What about Jason and the rest of the gang, plus Kat? What sort of long-term effects will be cropping up? And Jeff and his gang of brain-dead morons; what'll happen to them? MY preference would be expulsion-with-extreme-prejudice from school, off of the football team and arrested. Plus how will this affect the school and community as a whole?
There's a lot of potential here for some major fun! I'll be interested in seeing what your mind/muses come up with in/for future chapters.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story and hope you can update it, love to see what happens next.
The idea that Jason wouldn't leave Tommy is very true to his character, whether or not he loved Tommy he wouldn't abandon his friend when he needed him.
Hope you up date soon, and hope Jason doesn't go and do something he regrets like beating the hell out of the bastards that hurt his best friend. (Although I wouldn't blame him if he did they'd deserve it. They did leave him to die after all.) But that is a job for the justice system (when it works.) Anyway looking forward the next chapter
The idea that Jason wouldn't leave Tommy is very true to his character, whether or not he loved Tommy he wouldn't abandon his friend when he needed him.
Hope you up date soon, and hope Jason doesn't go and do something he regrets like beating the hell out of the bastards that hurt his best friend. (Although I wouldn't blame him if he did they'd deserve it. They did leave him to die after all.) But that is a job for the justice system (when it works.) Anyway looking forward the next chapter
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update Please!!! I just love how it is going so far.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intense, please continue. Kat is actually starting to grow on me.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About time. YAY!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am in tears right now. That was very well written. I feel so bad for Tommay. Please, update soon.