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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue... There aren't many blood ties fics to be found. The Blood Book novels by Tanya Huff are awesome. Much better than the tv series! They are hard to put down. I highly recommend reading them.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blink* that was brief. Maybe you're trying to be mysterious to draw the reader in? Really, though, it's just vague, and not very interesting. Nick can't sleep at night...? is that the problem? How can his 'contacts' help him with that?
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....that was brief.
I liked Blood Ties and think a crossover between Blood Ties and Forever Knight would be interesting. I know that not everyone is as verbose as i am either but i couldn't really get a sense of your story with so little posted. Also, you might want to look at adding quotation marks where people are speaking. As your story grows (and i hope it does), it will be easier for your readers separate your characters' dialogue from the 'narration' of the story.
i look forward to reading more. *S*
psyche b.
I liked Blood Ties and think a crossover between Blood Ties and Forever Knight would be interesting. I know that not everyone is as verbose as i am either but i couldn't really get a sense of your story with so little posted. Also, you might want to look at adding quotation marks where people are speaking. As your story grows (and i hope it does), it will be easier for your readers separate your characters' dialogue from the 'narration' of the story.
i look forward to reading more. *S*
psyche b.