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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story needs moar chapters. It's very yummy. I wanna know what happens next. Hurry! LOL
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was awesome! I loved it! Such a plausable story. Keep up the great work!
--SerenityMeiMei
--SerenityMeiMei
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Much better writing than some of the work on here. The first few paragraphs are a little awkward; beginnings are hard. Very good flow once you get into it. Character's voices are true. Nice work.