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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really lovely piece, nicely handled, people very much in character, and all ends neatly tied together by the concluding chapter. Thank you for a very enjoyable read! 'Purr
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story I enjoyed it very much. are you thinking about a sequel? Could be fun.. or angst.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great!! I just wanted to read the first chapter and then I realised I couldn't stop myself!!
It's so difficult to find a good Jack/Daniel fic, thank you ^^
It's so difficult to find a good Jack/Daniel fic, thank you ^^
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Found this in a random urge to read one of my old fandoms. You are really good at keeping them in character even in a situation that is different to the SG universe. I loved every minute of it and couldn't stop laughing at the awesomeness that is Jack! I almost cried to see that it ended at chap 17 then realized you updated recently. So I now know you will be writing on it again! Thank you so much and I will definitely be around to read the end of this story!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was nice. I really like it. :]
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Noooo!!O_O PLZZZ tell me U HAVEN'T ABANDONED:'-( this Infinately PROMISING & Endlessly FASCINATING Work of WONFERFULLY Well Written & BRILLIANTLY, (ADDICTIVELY) Fabulous fiction ;D!!!
Coz to leave (us hopelessly addicted;p) fangirlz with a last-line THIS titallatingly Tantalizing = BeYoNd MEAN, it would be a TRAGEDY of Epic proportions, simply put: it's PURE E-V-O-L ;p!!! So I sincerly hope that U'll forgive me my inability to shower this (ADDICTIVELY) A-W-E-S-O-M-E & Ingeniously fascinating fic with the praise -it so Richly deserves- (4 I find myself much too BLOWN-Away by this portrayal of Undeniable TALENT, Wonderfull Writing skills, COMPELLING Characterizations, Captivating character-interactions, Mind-Meltingly HOT & Sizzling sex-scene's & the overal OVERWHELMING-ness of this Breathtakingly REFRESHING Gem of utter BRILLIANCE & ORIGINALITY that Entices & Enthralls 1 leaving them hungry 4 (MUCH) M-O-R-E !!!! ;D)
So instead I hope U'll take my word 4 it when I say that: I Absolutely A-D-O-R-E-D Ur Exquisetly EXCELLENT Work ^_^! & Sincerly hope -for the sake of ALL the utterly ADDICTED fangirlz out there- that U'll update soon^_~!! -& let me know, if there's ANYTHING at all that I can do to help speed up the updating proces ;D- (4 I'm afraid what little = left of my sanity -after (fruitlessly) waiting/pining 4 about a week already- Wouldn't survive much longer, without atleast some hope that U'r goinna finish this Truly FANTASTIC fic -Someday-;D) & will let me know at the_real_amelia@hotmail.com when u do, So that I can come bother U with some more Randome Rambling/Ranting/Raving/ALL of the above disguised as a review ^_^ *Gives U the Patented-Pleading-Puppy-Eyes-Danny-look, topped off with the Tm-U-Know-U-WANT-to-Jack-Smirk* ^_~
P.S. Also terribly Sorry about any spelling mistakes, inconsistancies, grammatical errors &/or out-right rambling, as I'm afraid my desire to share with u how much I LOVED this ADORABLY Addictive & Infinately FASCINATING Story, overrulled my common-sense & I forgot to spell check (4 normally when I'm -NOT- Bouncing off the walls with excitement(over the AWESOME-ness that = this AMAZING fic) or having to scrape my brain off the floor after having it melted into a puddle of goo (again coz of the Mind-MELTING qualities of this superb story) I'm quite good at catching spelling mistakes & things of that sort;p (So I'm afraid any & all errors U've had to suffer through R entirely Ur own fault, 4 writing such a Mind-BLOWINGLY Sublime Story ^_~)
Coz to leave (us hopelessly addicted;p) fangirlz with a last-line THIS titallatingly Tantalizing = BeYoNd MEAN, it would be a TRAGEDY of Epic proportions, simply put: it's PURE E-V-O-L ;p!!! So I sincerly hope that U'll forgive me my inability to shower this (ADDICTIVELY) A-W-E-S-O-M-E & Ingeniously fascinating fic with the praise -it so Richly deserves- (4 I find myself much too BLOWN-Away by this portrayal of Undeniable TALENT, Wonderfull Writing skills, COMPELLING Characterizations, Captivating character-interactions, Mind-Meltingly HOT & Sizzling sex-scene's & the overal OVERWHELMING-ness of this Breathtakingly REFRESHING Gem of utter BRILLIANCE & ORIGINALITY that Entices & Enthralls 1 leaving them hungry 4 (MUCH) M-O-R-E !!!! ;D)
So instead I hope U'll take my word 4 it when I say that: I Absolutely A-D-O-R-E-D Ur Exquisetly EXCELLENT Work ^_^! & Sincerly hope -for the sake of ALL the utterly ADDICTED fangirlz out there- that U'll update soon^_~!! -& let me know, if there's ANYTHING at all that I can do to help speed up the updating proces ;D- (4 I'm afraid what little = left of my sanity -after (fruitlessly) waiting/pining 4 about a week already- Wouldn't survive much longer, without atleast some hope that U'r goinna finish this Truly FANTASTIC fic -Someday-;D) & will let me know at the_real_amelia@hotmail.com when u do, So that I can come bother U with some more Randome Rambling/Ranting/Raving/ALL of the above disguised as a review ^_^ *Gives U the Patented-Pleading-Puppy-Eyes-Danny-look, topped off with the Tm-U-Know-U-WANT-to-Jack-Smirk* ^_~
P.S. Also terribly Sorry about any spelling mistakes, inconsistancies, grammatical errors &/or out-right rambling, as I'm afraid my desire to share with u how much I LOVED this ADORABLY Addictive & Infinately FASCINATING Story, overrulled my common-sense & I forgot to spell check (4 normally when I'm -NOT- Bouncing off the walls with excitement(over the AWESOME-ness that = this AMAZING fic) or having to scrape my brain off the floor after having it melted into a puddle of goo (again coz of the Mind-MELTING qualities of this superb story) I'm quite good at catching spelling mistakes & things of that sort;p (So I'm afraid any & all errors U've had to suffer through R entirely Ur own fault, 4 writing such a Mind-BLOWINGLY Sublime Story ^_~)
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! And I mean it. It was first SG fic i red in a while and I was completly englufed with it. I red all 14 chapters and loved slowly building action between them. I loved shynes of Danny and sureness of Jack.
I can't wait to read more chapters:))))
I can't wait to read more chapters:))))
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
STILL LOVING IT!!
Can't wait for the next chapter as i am still caught up in rapture each time i read another bit. Keep going and i will keep reviewing and loving it!
Thanks again and see you soon.
Emma
Can't wait for the next chapter as i am still caught up in rapture each time i read another bit. Keep going and i will keep reviewing and loving it!
Thanks again and see you soon.
Emma
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well this is my 1st stargate reading on any fanfic. watch the show till the last eposode
and i can tella, jack and daniel wow !!!!
are you gona finish it , kinda wonder about it can daniel do it ,
and i can tella, jack and daniel wow !!!!
are you gona finish it , kinda wonder about it can daniel do it ,
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. It didn't fully go away did it? Jack does have to be the 'woman,' huh?