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for Pain and Comfort

by jbeau

person BolaTwilight
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intense. Well written.
person BolaTwilight
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! HORATIO!! ;) Very well written. I'll be happy to read the next chapter. ;)
person BolaTwilight
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think H would tie her after what happened, but the rest was very in-character, which I really liked. Very well written, still. I would love to read more of your work, hopefully DuCaine. ;)
person Giwu1412
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, I really liked Chapter 2 as a stand alone. I actually think you have two stories here. One where Calleigh is kidnapped and within a split second of being raped and another story where Horatio is dominating her. I thought this was very good.
On an another note, I can tell you are like me, typing is not what you do best (I mean that good-naturedly)! If you would like me to beta this story or any other story you are working on, feel free to contact me at Giwu2007 on the Y network.
Really, a great job, just a bit rough in places!

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