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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is creepy, especially the end, but I somehow liked it nevertheless since it was written very well.
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so were Daniel and Jack lovers?
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you that I think this story is great!
I hope you are still planning on updating it, I want to know how it ends!
/Rai
I hope you are still planning on updating it, I want to know how it ends!
/Rai
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I hope you get a new PC soon! Can't wait for the last chapter, think my eyes teared up more then once.
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update I wany to see this swine get his comeuppance, gritty tale am so glad you did not go down the route of rape and contol making someone suddenly fall in love. I wept for Daniel and I too commend your ability to let us see this through the eyes of Frank.
5 Stars without saying wish I could score you more
Ladyaph
5 Stars without saying wish I could score you more
Ladyaph
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! I do hope you update with ch. 20, but it flows well even without the final chapter. I love the choice you made to use First Person and to have that person be an OC that was amazingly well written just makes the whole story that much better. I hope to see similar writing from you in the future!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Daniel. Not only is he the show's whipping-boy, he's ours too. But we wouldn't have it any other way.
Update soon, you're killing me here. One chapter to go?
Update soon, you're killing me here. One chapter to go?
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah!! Where is the rest?!?!?!?!?!? PLEASE HURRY!! I LOVE this!! I spent FOREVER reading this and it wasn't FINISHED!! Poor poor Danny!! Damn you for your ending it like this! I demand a happy ending!!!!!!!!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope you will update soon. Pleeeeease.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! tell me that 20/20 is like ready to be posted... now!! Begging now.