rate_review Reviews

I like it....very subtle and way to keep them in character

i really liked the begining but the end... not so much. the start had great attention to detail and described the character's emotions perfectly, but as the story progressed it just seemed rushed and like less and less thought was put into writting it. if only you would have put the same amount of care and detail in the end (i.e. the sex). the fic is still pretty good though