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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a great adult story between Kal-El and Lois, that shows it was a dream from Lois about Kal-El. Keep adding story chapters of this story because these two are destined to be together.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... you have a gift of describing things in detail, yet the reader has an impression, that everything keeps in right tempo. This is fantastic! Have you ever think of writring something a little more rougher? Like Kalois (Kal=+Lois). I'm curious how you would write a semi=rape scene with youe descriptive writing.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was very imaginative I really enjoyed it.