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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been a nice trio of fiction. The pacing is good, as is the characterizations. Both Gibbs and Tim are believable. My main complaint is your spelling. i.e. tern, terns instead of 'turn'. or wait instead of weight. A tern is a sea bird. Weight refers to body mass or heaviness. Wait is what you do in the doctors office before your appointment.