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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Promising beginning. Could have done without the changing tenses during the commentary about Lois' vindictive streak... The story is interesting but could do with just a little 'tightening'... Waiting to see where you take this. 'Purr
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting Chapter
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good start I'll definitely Keep reading this one .