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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is REALLY GREAT!!!
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters one through four
Great job of recapping the Doctor's past, and developing a history of Rose's activities too.
I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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Great job of recapping the Doctor's past, and developing a history of Rose's activities too.
I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. very well writhen over all, I will however point out a few mistakes: 1: It was the Firsth World War (1914-18) they landed in 1913, and Joan says: "You whrote aboudt next year in your book." 2: The Doctor could infact turn back to John Smith, but would not. (fathe of the universe being more important than a love he no longer felt, if you ask me). Looking forward to the next chapter. (And plz excuse the spelling, English is Sooo not my firsth language)