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by Leighsa

person Cherry_Starburst
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, I've been looking for a good Christ/Wyatt story for a few days and I have to say this is the best one I've found of the bunch! I was actually a bit wary of clicking on this story, it didn't seem like my thing. Your title and summary made it sound like it would just be a bunch of memories randomly mixed together as drabbles and I'm not a fan of those kinds of things. However, this is actually a proper story and not just short memories. It's fluid. Maybe you should improve your summary to reflect this? That's my suggestion. On the actual story front, I found the story very sexy and quite cute, although there are a couple of odd things. Where are the men, for a start. You have the sisters around but it seems almost like they have no husbands, which is a shame because I'd love to see Leo's reaction to the relationship. There's also no other children. Personally I dislike the other Charmed children in stories anyway (there's too many of them!) but it's a bit odd that they don't seem to exist. Other than that, it's really good, best ChrisxWyatt I've read. Keep up the good work :)
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's a little hard to follow with the flashbacks--i think some of the markers might be in the wrong place?
it was enjoyable nonetheless! thanks for sharing
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person magela
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Meeeh, so I wrote a rather nice review if I may say so myself, and then of course AF eated it. D<

The gist of it however: More. MORE. MOAR.

Preferably now. Or in the, uh, vicinity of now. Yes.

Because you have a great plot and a great style and this is one of the best stories on here. And the C/W fandom in general.

So more. Please. :)
person Zacarane
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story. I love it. Please continue.^^
person bonksie
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!
I must admit that I did not expect that!!
Amazing!!
Please update soon.
person bonksie
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aawwwww how sweet!!
person bonksie
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like this chapter aswell.
as for ideas for the next chapters, how about having a jealousy problem with one of the boys, you know ...eurm...seeing them talking to someone at school (flirting) and the make-up session afterwards.
just a suggestion you dont have to take any notice of it.
but please continue soon I cant wait!!
person Arishaa
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story - love to read more!
person bonksie
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chappy!!
What rotten luck the boys had when Piper knocked on the door!
anyway, keep going its a great fic, you wouldnt believe that it was your first one!

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