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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story.
The lemony section was brief, but very well written, especially for a first attempt.
Things are looking up for John. I look forward to the next chapter.
The lemony section was brief, but very well written, especially for a first attempt.
Things are looking up for John. I look forward to the next chapter.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Extraordinary, especially for an early effort, but it would stand on it's own nonetheless. It even makes me like Riley, something the actual show can't accomplish :D