rate_review Reviews

awesome chapter would lov a miley mandy fic

I really liked both stories! Ugh, making me choose which is better, you're evil. Um... I really enjoyed your diction, you made sure that a phrase or worde was never used so much as to make it seem redundant or annoing, which I see soooo much. I guess if I had to choose, I'd say I enjoyed chapter 2 more just because I like it more passionate and more heavy. Hwever, both were wonderful, and if you were going for a more sensual feel, I'd definately write something more like the first chapter. Either way, great work, and you've earned a bookmark of your page.

I defiantly liked Oliver&Lilly's better, it was more interesting and Jake&Miley make me want to vomit although your writing was well. I love your writings and hope to see some different HM stuff from you. Perhaps some aftermath of The Man with the Plan?

Great story, hope that there are many more chapters to come from this one..... Thanks for the hard work on this one.....