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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please,I love when Jayne gets the girl. Please finish this, I hope he gets her back.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am totally hooked. My heart is breaking for Jayne. I want the happy ending of him barging in and saving poor Revelle before the General breaks her completely.
I hope you finish it.
I hope you finish it.
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June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was THE BEST fan fiction that have ever read. I love the charector Jayne. This was a great f/f for me. There are some editing errors and a couple of none vocab. Words expressionful is not a word. Some errors in grammar but, that is editing. Loved Loved Loved this and I want more. That can not be the end. There are so many possabilites. Please finish.
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October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please keep going. I have completely fallen in love with this store. You have put everything together so well please continue.
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really good I hope there's more
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic. I love seeing the tender side of Jayne and that love scene was hot. More please.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's cool to see Jayne actually get a girl unlike in the series/movie. Please write another chapter to at least reunite the couple so Jayne can really get the girl!