AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for The Long, Lonely Road Ahead

by OktoberBlack

schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you didn't receive many reviews at the time you posted this. you are a very fine writer and deserve uplifting feedback and encouragement.

This is not the usual Criminal Minds fic I usually read. I must admit I'm titillated by m/m slash and heavily fan Hotch and Reid together. (Although I also fan Morgan/Reid and think them a better/ more likely and more symbiotic couple, I find Hotch's fierce loyalty and protectiveness really curls my toes!) Hotch and someone NOT Reid doesn't really call to me, in fact I tend to feel jealousy on Reid's behalf when I do read them, lol. So this fic is a major departure for me and I am glad I read it. It was a very interesting casefic/ romance, character study and showed Hotch in a very vulnerable and sexy way. Terra was a worthy original character and her history rang (unfortunately) true enough to make her a whole fleshed out character who was believable.

My only disappointment was that it ended so sad. I kinda wish she died in a blaze of glory. Some way heroic. Banished and alone having a child who will never know her father or half brother is just too depressing.

I shed a few tears over the ending.

LOL, that's a compliment, by the way. Not that I enjoy the post tears headache.

Thanks for the lovely day of reading your story provided!

Michelle
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was my first Criminal Minds fic and its good. I want to know what will happen next.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?