rate_review Reviews

Great story! I really hope there is an ending coming! I'm curious where Madi is heading. You've made her child-like but still fierce, which is a nice combo but could make a relationship awkward to work with. Something that could use addressing would bee how she was such a good shot with no training. Perhaps just a dialogue about previous experience or something like that. Like I said, I was totally entranced. I really really really really really really hope you finish!
Elendilsheart