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by ellia

person jewel
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I'm always amazed when I read something so short that pushes all the right buttons, is complete PWP yet still retains integrity. This is D/S but still kind of sweet. It's clever and simple. I think it's the language, the dialogue that is the really sexy part, not necessarily the actions. In the dialogue there's praise, commands, submission w/ a hint of humiliation (it seems Dean has a hard time asking for what he wants, i read it as something that goes against Dean's nature, to admit that he needs/wants anything, so its always a little humiliating to do so. make sense?) and contentment. Wonderful. Well Done. I for one think there could be more and would certainly read on if you were to continue with a series of these situations. Thanks for writing and posting.
person qoh
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really hot fic, submissive dean is my favorite. I really hope you write more at some point.

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