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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very hot. Loved it.
Y'know, a shower scene would be nice... ;)
Y'know, a shower scene would be nice... ;)
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EIGHT THUMBS UP!!! Well if I had eight thumbs...lol!
Wonderful fic, I love Alex/Bobby pairings and you delivered
quite delightfully!
Yummy nekkid Bobby...mmmmm
Wonderful fic, I love Alex/Bobby pairings and you delivered
quite delightfully!
Yummy nekkid Bobby...mmmmm
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Good descriptions and pace... A few grammar errors as well as tense changes (something I do too), but nothing that jarrs the reader out of the story. Again, WELL DONE.