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OMG sweetie I'll happily take the inspiration for that and can't wait for more, that was amazing. More smut please :) You write sizzling hot filth I loved it.

Good job, but after the story began with a very eloquent and romantic tone, I was rather put off by the sudden switch to slang words.

Hello, Midknight,

I was just wondering if there were any Castle fan fics in AFF and came across yours. I like your portrayal of Richard Castle, and I think you capture him well, especially with the quips he's so well known and loved for. Now you asked for feedback, so I thought I'd make one "grammar nerd" suggestion, if that's okay? I was a bit confused following the dialogue, due to both characters speaking within the same paragraph. It makes it hard to tell who is saying what. Generally, a new paragraph is started each time a different character speaks, and that helps keep them straight. Beyond that, you have a knack for getting right to the action without going too fast, and also without bypassing the scene set-up (while keeping the set-up nice and short). Again, your Rick Castle was a lot of fun, and rather nicely kept in canon, too. Thanks for a fun romp! - Anon

that was awsome i hope your making the next chapter or a new one i love castle soo much