rate_review Reviews

Great story. You've got Ziva's character down and the tone is good. I really liked the sense of resilience and the emotions you described for Ziva. I'm hoping you'll write more.

wow, it was captivant. And it really fit in the show, with the fact that she didn't seem so injured at the rescue : because the physical torture was far away.
Good writting, nothing too graphic, just what I was looking for : a version realistic of what could have happened to Ziva in Somalia. A version which could explain how she broke, what she went throught.
It a shame that in the show she seems quite alright afer her rescue : everything is fine, no flashback, nightmare, depression or other....
You could write a continuation, couldn't you ? Withl her coping everyting.

Thanks for your review! I am working on a new story, basically a better developed one about Ziva's time in Somalia and this one will include her return to NCIS. Hopefully I will have at least the first part up soon.

I liked it very much. I also like Ziva/bad guy. You were realistic as no other FF author has ever been in writing about Viva's captivity, and you did it with details that -apparently- others haven't considered. :) However, as much as I like Ziva in trouble and in great distress, I also like the aftermath, when she's being healed -whether it's physically or mentally/psychically, or the dealing with it.. It's interesting read about broken!Ziva.*hinthint*

Anyways, I like your story very much, and I've come here several times to see if you have written anything new, about anything! >.< I hope you continue writing.