rate_review Reviews

Chapter #1:

This was hilarious, from the passage where Ducky says to Tony "... it's not that you're mentally devoid..." regarding his foolish tactics, to Ziva completely enjoying this encounter; for predictable reasons, to the online photographs of, one of which shows the immediate after-effects of McGee punching Tony over the desk for insinuating that McGee is in fact a homosexual- something that, by and large, will ensure being punched, rather hard, come to think of it (that idea is a massive insult).

All in all, I love this piece, and it seems Ziva's going to be into a bit of office-blackmail, come to think of it. Seeing as how she got Abby to forward to Tony the photos she took of the antics between McGee and Tony.

Great story!!!

That was excellent, good balance typos far and in between. And i could completely see that as an episode while i read it.

It's obvious you're a McGee girl and that's good but please don't make him look like the poor boy who never gets what he wants because lately Tim is just an ass. Tim acts like he's better than other and if that was true then he wouldn't need to show it.
I like your fic, it's a interesting idea but you write everyone like they should treat Tim like their king. TIm is not perfect.

I like the way Tim is working through his thoughts. the way you divide up the chapter to include different POVs makes it easy to follow. I'm looking forward to continuing this read!

Yay, another update! Poor Tony though, can't wait to see Tim kick some major ass!

Are you gonna continue this story? I've been dying to know what happens next!

I like the progression of the relationship between Tim and Tony. I hope Tim can convince Tony that seeking out an exclusive relationship with him wouldn't be such a bad thing.

Another great chapter! I love the growing relationship between Tim and Tony. Can't wait to read more.

Oh dear. I like :). Gibbs was maybe a tad out of character, but screw that, I think that this is a quite intruiqing story! And I'm REALLY looking forward to reading about what will happen between Tim and Tony. Now, I don't even know if this is the direction in which you're heading, but even though Tim is a strong character and person in this fic, I don't think that Tony would bottom to him. The only person I see Tony doing that for is Gibbs. I'm glad that Abby and Tim made up, it hurt my heart to see those two fight. Even though none of them respect the others boundaries and private things XD. I hope you continue soon, I'm really curious :P