rate_review Reviews

I like it. =) I agree, that last chapter had a LOT of info in it, but you blended it together very well. Personally, I'd love to see a sequel or spinoff going into more details on the expansion of the pack. It was interesting how you brought the entire cast together (Matt as a mute- love it!). I hope now that you've completed your five-chapter work, you'll return to your usual extended style (Glimmering Light, anyone? lol). Great work!

Ok, I totally take back what I said about it moving too fast. This story is great. Can't wait for the next two chapters!

Hmm... Can't say I love the speed at which Mike decided/realized Kurt was his mate. Though well-written, the characters are developing a little too quickly for my taste. Ah well. Keep it up- it's obvious you've thought this story through. Maybe once you're done you can go back to "Glimmering Light?" *Puppy eyes* lol

Oh... My... God...

You've done it again.

Please, please, PLEASE write the rest of this story. I'm such a fan of your work, and this one's sounding like a page-scrolling good read! Love the idea- now stop reading my review and write the next chapter! ;)

I really like this! I love the concept, and of course it doesn't hurt that it's my favorite pairing either. I can't wait to read more and see where you're going to take this.