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January 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
When I was a kid I loved Ace - what a terrible end for her! There's a lot of great shock horror content in here, and that last bit really made me physically recoil - well done! And good descriptive work for something that's pretty much unimaginable. I was there, I could see it.
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I don't know... I wouldn't call it bad writing at all. It was actually quite vivid, and while the final bit of humiliation did actually make me squirm a bit, it worked too well within the story for me to protest. But talk about a fate worse than death...