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September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked the use of present-tense. It made me appreciate the scene so much more because it felt as though the events were unfolding before me. I also really liked the bit about Gabriel's sensitive spot. I thought that was an especially nice touch.
Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed the read despite the UST.