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October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I freaking luved ur story! Amazingly written! Wish there was more! Just amazing!
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April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Best Supernatural get-together fic EVER CREATED IN THE WHOLE WORLD!!!!!!!! O.o
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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great story by you! Kudos! Good one as usual and I liked the fluffiness of it.
A couple critiques though… In the Cas/Dean and Sam/Gabriel segments you used a ‘ instead of a “ for the speech part, something that really through me off and made it to where I had to reread most of that section a couple times to catch on to what was happening and whether or not it was thought rather than speech. Then the “ for thoughts rather than the ‘. That is something that did make that segment quite hard to read for me.
Beyond that, there were a few problems with punctuation, mostly comma use, or lack there of that made my brain stop here and there.
A beta would most assuredly help with these issues and provide a wonderful polish to an already good story.
Overall, it was a great read! Thanks for sharing this with us!
A couple critiques though… In the Cas/Dean and Sam/Gabriel segments you used a ‘ instead of a “ for the speech part, something that really through me off and made it to where I had to reread most of that section a couple times to catch on to what was happening and whether or not it was thought rather than speech. Then the “ for thoughts rather than the ‘. That is something that did make that segment quite hard to read for me.
Beyond that, there were a few problems with punctuation, mostly comma use, or lack there of that made my brain stop here and there.
A beta would most assuredly help with these issues and provide a wonderful polish to an already good story.
Overall, it was a great read! Thanks for sharing this with us!