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for The Thirteenth Step

by ExOnEv

person Anon
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I'm just a glutton for punishment or something but I really enjoy this story, even though the tension has me so anxious my stomach is in knots. Haha. I can't help but feel bad for both of them. To me, Spencer's got it so bad he's bordering on obsessed but I also feel like he's going to be the type to be more invested (and more quickly invested) than his partner and that's the type of person who can be taken advanatge of. And Derek seems so resistant to this (all those childhood demons), but kind of seems like he's been taken hostage (on one hand he wants to protect Reid from relapsing and wants to be a good friend, but it also seems like he's finding himself becoming a slave to his desires as well). So, like I said, the tension is THICK. But this is the first D/S fic I've read where derek is almost vehemently against a relationship with spencer and I find that dynamic to be very intriguing. Anywho, I'll definitely keep reading. Keep up the good work!
person wagamama hime
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I'm just a glutton for punishment or something but I really enjoy this story, even though the tension has me so anxious my stomach is in knots. Haha. I can't help but feel bad for both of them. To me, Spencer's got it so bad he's bordering on obsessed but I also feel like he's going to be the type to be more invested (and more quickly invested) than his partner and that's the type of person who can be taken advanatge of. And Derek seems so resistant to this (all those childhood demons), but kind of seems like he's been taken hostage (on one hand he wants to protect Reid from relapsing and wants to be a good friend, but it also seems like he's finding himself becoming a slave to his desires as well). So, like I said, the tension is THICK. But this is the first D/S fic I've read where derek is almost vehemently against a relationship with spencer and I find that dynamic to be very intriguing. Anywho, I'll definitely keep reading. Keep up the good work!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story! Please keep it up. Love this couple. How difficult this is for both...especially Morgan. But for Spencer it is very hard also as he fears losing one of the rocks of his life - Morgan. He doesn't have many people in his life and none as important to his well being as Morgan.
person Shelby
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. This is an excellent story. More please!
person Crystal
schedule August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please write more soon! Your story was very well written and seems to stay in character as well. I loved it!
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Would love to hear more. I wonder if Morgan is right about Spencer and he is using again.
person bowsie22
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. Poor Reid. Morgan only wants to help. Can't wait for more =D
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite fics! I am so glad you are continuing it here. Your writing is incredible and this story is realistic. It's better than cannon for me.

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