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June 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I note a few spelling, word choice and grammatical errors in the fifth through seventh chapters, but the plot is solid and the story is interesting--filled with humor and drama. Well done!
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October 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving the character interactions and the developing dynamics, but is this abandoned? Hope not, I look forward to seeing the conclusion.