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September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
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October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter One: I'm a Carl/Beth fan myself and I have to say that your story was really good so far. Not much plot, but definitely Carl and Beth.
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October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter Two: Again not much plot, but a good little Beth moment. I particularly liked the part about Carl killing the other kid in the woods and that is what started their relationship.
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October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter Three: Yep Carl's going to need some condoms. :)
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April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Good descriptions and pace, but watch the grammar and there are a couple of out of place, stray words. Hope you keep building on this.